Not bad but room for improvement (which I have seen in your other work)
So. I'm not a mormon, or a christian, never have I read the book of Mormon, but I am an OrsonScott Card fan, and know that he's mormon, I also realized that in a lot of his books he kind of injects mormon idealogy. I did not, however, realize that basically the entire Homecoming/Earth Fall series was based off the book of mormon, except I think with a happier ending than 'natives killed all of us' or maybe that's not how the book of mormon ends and I just gathered wrong from this.