EgoCity Chap V disk2

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It's been awhile since I last submitted. Well this is my final episode and it all ends here X3 I want to thank everybody who supported me in the past to make this happen. & without a do, this show is at least 14mins long. Enjoy XD

Update: Sweetz 1st place and front page ^^ Thanx for all the respect and I also wanted to thank all the fans of my work along with the people who supported me and helped along the road to make this happen X3 Especially Tephy, my dear luv F3 and Thavidu of Phrozenflame.com for letting me host his site! In addition, I'll release a final encore on his site w/ added bonus so visit his site soon X3


Fantastic work

You've managed to tell a great story in 15 minutes. That's a fantastic accomplishment. But some parts were confusing, and some transitions did not make much sense.

It was not very obvious why the guys were fighting in some kind of dream-space (cyberish-looking) out of a sudden. First-time viewers (like myself) will have trouble understanding who's who. The voice acting could have been better too, but I understand you did with what you had at hand so you could get your vision out. Last but not least, some of storyline is very cliche'.

But thanks to the cliches, you get the point anyway. So overall, you do get what's going on. Much more importantly, you've managed to give in 15 action-packed minutes as much content as many animated series deliver in several 30-minutes episodes. For that, you deserve the highest scores, and my critiques aboves are only in hopes that your next one will be even better!


I know this may seem stupid but I honestly feel this is the best thing on newgrounds.

Story wasn't to cheesey but opened up a ton of cool oppertunities

Action was very well done.

Just. wow



Indeed it is. I'm glad I was able to be part of IPS all these years. I can't wait until your "next series." Great job, old friend.


This was... is a great submission. Hope to see more from u.

That was awesome!

Dude!, that's the greatest animation you have done yet!... all my 5 are belong to this. Hope to see more from you soon. =3

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4.29 / 5.00

Feb 26, 2006
12:36 PM EST
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