You've managed to tell a great story in 15 minutes. That's a fantastic accomplishment. But some parts were confusing, and some transitions did not make much sense.
It was not very obvious why the guys were fighting in some kind of dream-space (cyberish-looking) out of a sudden. First-time viewers (like myself) will have trouble understanding who's who. The voice acting could have been better too, but I understand you did with what you had at hand so you could get your vision out. Last but not least, some of storyline is very cliche'.
But thanks to the cliches, you get the point anyway. So overall, you do get what's going on. Much more importantly, you've managed to give in 15 action-packed minutes as much content as many animated series deliver in several 30-minutes episodes. For that, you deserve the highest scores, and my critiques aboves are only in hopes that your next one will be even better!
I know this may seem stupid but I honestly feel this is the best thing on newgrounds.
Story wasn't to cheesey but opened up a ton of cool oppertunities
Action was very well done.
Indeed it is. I'm glad I was able to be part of IPS all these years. I can't wait until your "next series." Great job, old friend.
This was... is a great submission. Hope to see more from u.
That was awesome!
Dude!, that's the greatest animation you have done yet!... all my 5 are belong to this. Hope to see more from you soon. =3