it was ok
that was alright
Author Comments
I accidently updated the old version before this because I thought the rules had said you couldn't re-submit at all. Anyways, I updated the audio and totally redid some parts. You can actually hear it now. I also added...SUBTITLES! This, again, is based off my comic series "A Trio of 3"
Great!Keep it up!
from the beginning, this looks utter crap,but after it started it was so fugging funny!you should make more
Good job, mate!
Well, you have talent when it comes to storyline, or at least making jokes. I was laughing through most of it. However, your graphics suggest you have been making Flash very long. I think your graphics need work, and it needs to be longer. Still, it was a clean Flash; there weren't any disappearing symbols or sucky tweening or anything. Nicely done.
black-sun1 responds:
Thank you for the suggestions. They will help in the future. Yeah I've been using Flash for quite a while actually, but I've made few movies, especially longer ones like this. My first one was about 5 seconds long. Just some dude with a shotgun. But hey look at me rambling on. Thanks for the help.
I liked it alot
Good job with this movie. I dont really know what you could have improved on really.
Yet again
You have failed, but it's better. I would change the voices and make the plot a little longer to make this thing a little more entertaining.
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