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In The Toilet

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This is a movie based on a joke that my dad told me. It is a bit of a mix between frame by frame and tweens. If you do watch it please watch it right to the end.

NOTE: IT PROBLEY ISN'T VERY CLEAR IN THE MOVIE SO ILL TELL YOU NOW. "UNKOWN VOICE" IS THE PERSON IN THE CUBICAL NEXT TO THE MAN.

Enjoy

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not bad

maybe you should re-animate it with mouth movements and stuff, and it would do a lot better. but it is a funny concept.

lolz

yeah.
did u try 2make it funny
well do that
its boring
u shuld draw his face turned left... '

dun tell me uve put efford in to that
dis sux
& good luk in gettin skillz

RedDevil responds:

Thanks for the positive feedback not everyones perfect like you. Everyone has to start somewhere and yes I have put in efort to this but im not that good. But im getting better. (You havent even done any flash. well its not on newgrounds)

old joke

that joke is so old and stupid try something else

as my 3 says,not bad,in fact...i like it!

i suppose it was ok,but you should carry on,on a different concept,and the intro was too long

Not bad, didn't find it super funny

First of all, good work on the animation and artwork, it was well done. I thought on the whole the joke wasnt funny enough to be made into a cartoon, its kind of more of a one-liner. Also, in terms of sound I thought the song in the end credits was good and appropriete, the begining one is overused and you might have been able to find something better. The Voice quality was kind of mediocre, you might want to look into improving it if you can. But you do certainly show talent as a cartoonist, you just need to find some better material and maybe recording equipment

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3,565
Votes
18
Score
3.42 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 25, 2006
11:31 PM EST