9 because I know there could be better...
I'm not sure if I have the right message from this series but I think this space-like object is some kind of chaos invoking (did I spell that right?>_<) equiptment that any planet it might pass will be imersed in chaos out of the blue... I also think that you were trying to help others understand by saying that every town has a devil so why can't space and all universes? Anyway, I don't want to miss-inform anyone. I give it an overall of nine because I believe you could do better. Sorry, but judging the style and thought put in I think you have some potential to do better. Nice work overall and I'm waiting to give you a ten. =)