Interesting piece of work!

The Character design and art was the best aspect of this! The in and out text was also great leading up to the explosion. Nice blood effects! Keep up the great work =]

((( DECENT )))

This was decent, i like how the "CHARACTERS" were abit sketchy like drawing form, the black and white was notbad, and the little red color like the blood was perfect with the black and white...

You could improve on this, by having abit less text between clips, and have it just run as one movie, nice animation though i liked it, anyways good flash keep it up...

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Could have been better.

Too many of the animations were recycled too many times, and it moved far too slowly. At the pace the movie moved at, the poem felt like a series of pieces of text, not a poem. I wasn't able to get the whole of the poem.

The music was bad, too; it would probably have had a better impact had you not had that in there.

One last note: when you use elipses (...) you should be fairly consistant; using four dots and then three dots and then four... etc looks pretty amaturish. But, it's a problem that seems to plague Newgrounds (that and poor grammar), so don't sweat it too much.

Shitty shit

that was gay ass lame srry

mixed

The graphics were okay, the animation was kinda okay. Sound was for crap. It was sOOOOO sloOOOOow!