Hey Hey king

Hey, I figured I'd check your work out after you threatened to sue me, I replied to your e-mail. I see some similarities but I think they're two very different stories :). I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
Good luck!

I helped!

It's CrimzonQuester, Josh, not CrimzonClean! And yes, Triggen, it didn't have a story, but that is because the first episode wasn't supposed to have one, because it wouldn't need one until ep. 2.

Sorry, didn't like it.

I'm sorry, i didn't like it at all.
the sound was suprisingly good, but the animation was just covered by the blurs and this movie didn't have a story.
and if the animation doesn't have a story, and it lacks smoothness... it makes it a bad movie.
jus try harder, and don't use gradients.
try shading your backgrounds!

meh stick movies...

this one was actually ok though it was horribly gradient raped. practice making hand made gradients next time.

okay, but shows enormous potential

a couple things really, human actions are more complex then just your ligaments moving, try animating more then just dudes pulling out guns and stuff like that (since this is sticks that shouldnt be enormously difficult). not to be mean or anything, but the buildings and backround were completely lame. i get that you were trying to go for a destroyed city look, but the overall city felt basic and lacking. lastly, timing sounds and using sound effects; i could tell you lowered the sound so you could hear the dude speaking at first, but the sound came back in afterwards and you couldnt here the other dude saying "now get out of there" afterwards. and yea, sound effects. things make sound when they blow up.... loud sounds

if you want any hints or tips id be happy to talk to you in an IM, my AIM address is in my profile if you feel the need