Great!
Another nice episode in this great series! The graphics are constantly being improved, the filesize is tiny and the concept is amusing, as always. Looking forward to many more episodes, keep it going!
-cd-
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Twisted Little Creatures - Episode 10
"Steps for Successful Schooling"
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A very short TLC, that I made at the beginning of the 2004 school year. Someone gets punched. Still new new (not a typo) ones to come.
cool one
that was a nice 10th episode. a little bit short, but the 'schooling' idea and concept to this one was good. since i've been out of school for a few years now... i just couldn't resist but laugh real hard at this one. nice job on the humour level in this one.
Interesting.
I think that flashes like this should be a little longer than this one, it definitely needs some more content. The graphics weren't terrible, though there needs to be some better shading and what not. This was an interesting flash and most of it was mildly funny. The number 2 pencil part was the best part with the mouse, that was kind of weird. Voice overs were nice, but not much other sound. Best part was definitely the end with the menu to replay whatever part you wanted, you got extra interactivity points for that.
JacobMichaelCampbell responds:
Yeah, it was a really short idea. Just a little PSA for the kids. Thanks for watching/reviewing.
Not bad.
I enjoyed it. I loved when the rat attacked the kid. All in all, it was pretty good!
JacobMichaelCampbell responds:
Thanks so much! Yeah, it's a possum, though. It's kind of an on going joke.
pretty bad, but the artist does have potential
Like any artist, you need a good idea. something freash and new, this was a very poor example. but its obvious that you are pretty noligible using macromedia flash. so now all you need is a good story.
JacobMichaelCampbell responds:
Check out some of my other stuff too. Maybe you'll find a story you do like.