Good
I liked what you have so far, and I really do hope that you finish it! You cut out my faveorit part of the song! lol
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music video for Dr. Online by Zeromancer. a girl's imaginary friends promote suicide.
(due to flashing colors, this flash is not recomened for people who can't handel strobe light effects)
NOTE: this flash isn't finished but i could use some construcive feedback...saying it sucks and not giving a reason isn't gonna help me make it better.
A one line summary!
Its a good music video i would have to say myself, though i dont really enjoy suicide. But otherwise if you finish this im sure it will be alot better than it already is and i hope to see the finished product soon so i can review more stuff! lol gl anyways hope for the bestestness!
Giocovier
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Wow! Nice flash :D
Unique...
I can tell you arn't using flash MX... are you? :)
Nice graphics in anycase, nice song as well.
Good luck making your finished piece :D Will be waiting to see it ^^
VirtualyDecayingGirl responds:
thanx for the review!!
no i didn't, i used a rather shitty program..Atani 3.4 (the free thing).
thanx luck is something i'm really gonna need, i finally broke and bought a much better program so i'm gonna redo quite a good bit of it... i should have iit done in a few weeks however ^^
Looks good
although it is kind of morbid.
I have one hint though, give it a preloader (you can download one on newgrounds for free)
-CitadelVeteran
VirtualyDecayingGirl responds:
I did that already and it will go on the final.thank you for te review. ^^
Hey iam always
up for that thing thta changes Newgrounds sorry this wasnt it!!!!I liked it a littel bit though!!!Next time do it beter and you might have a Revoulation flash!Biz atch!!!
VirtualyDecayingGirl responds:
well hopefully the completed version will be that flash. ^^