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This one is not that long but there are two parts to it that makes it long. The second part should be done around march. Well I hope you enjoy it! And since this is the first part It dose not show much the theme from the title thats why you need to see the second part when it comes out. Enjoy!


*UPDATE* I'm getting mad coz people arent reading this>>>>>This is the first part and it has not much to do whith the plot but the second one will be the real thing.

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uh hey, im barrellock

hi.
im barrellock.
im on the first page of registered users of the LL.
i joined in like october of 2004.
i really dont know who you are. i think your WMP lock's cousin?
but yeah, i really like my name. and my .fla. and i know you can take the .flas out of the library...but...not if you're putting them out as your own lock. i'm not really mad, cause you didn't know(?). and i haven't been active in the LL for a bit. it was just kinda odd to come back to the wondrous world of flash to find that you've been identity theft'd. there’s a LOT of good lock names out there. and i'm not demanding to take down your flash, and if you REALLY want to, you can keep your NG username barrel_lock. i just want my title back. and some recognition. thank you in advance.

smoothtoons responds:

Sorry about that man. Now that I know there's another barrellock out there I'll change my name to whatever and I'll never do that again and I hope you will forgive me, sorry about all of that.

YOUR NOT THE REAL BARREL LOCK!

YOUR AN IMPOSTER! I KNOW YOUR NOT THE REAL BARREL LOCK BECAUSE MY FRIEND IS THE REAL BARREL LOCK! HE DREW YOUR FREAKING PROFILE PIC FOR GODS SAKES AND YOU JUST TOOK IT OFF OF THE LOCK LEGION WEBSITE! WHY DONT YOU TRY BEING ORIGINAL AND COMING UP WITH A LOCK ON YOUR OWN, RATHER THEN STEALING SOMEONES ELSES!

Its ok

While I understand that you want people to take into consideration that it isn't finished and there is another part which will make more sense, you also have to understand that we can only vote/review based on *this* submission, and will do so accordingly.

You really should have waited until you finished the other part, and submitted them as one. If its not finished, why submit it in the first place?

As for the movie, there wasn't really anything particularly fantastic about it. Movement was ok, and I got a mild chuckle, but that was about it. Also, I don't know if it was intentional, but there were about 3 typos that I caught in your text. Typos should not exist in short movies like this unless there is a LOT of text.

2/5

Most excellent

It's good to hear from you, dude. =) I lol'd hard when Aubers hit his head on the car.

smoothtoons responds:

Thanx Man. Glad you liked it.

well

that was a first in my book... a LL, CC, KKK, BS thing that acctually had a PLOT!!!?!?!! BWAAA??

yea the music was superb, guy falling on car classic, the laughing guy got a little annoying but ehh.

gave it a 4, would have been a 5 if it wasnt a lock legion and had used acctual flash objest that look like humans. u got talent screw locks go out for urself

smoothtoons responds:

I do real people somtimes and there preety good but I don't submit themanyway. Thanx anyway

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3,066
Votes
12
Score
2.95 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 12, 2006
11:30 PM EST