Kinda liked the movie with the flapping arms and ending. Listening to the full audio though, I found dull.

The roaming camera kinda annoyed me.

I decided not to watch the 'shorts' bit you linked to.

I reckon you'd have been better off putting a bit more effort into your drawings and mouth shapes and worrying less about putting in all those extras. Better to have one higher-quality option than just throw lots at us in the hope that some will stick.

Odd you'd end the movie that way if he's your fave comedian...

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Well, this was a unique type of a submission I suppose. I liked the different sections of it, and how you split this up. The Jerry drawing wasn't too bad, and the sound quality was decent.

^^Needs Improving^^
I can't say this was really entertaining. The animations were pretty shoddy, and the whole thing was a little bit boring. Not sure I like how you link to your photobucket movies, which were pretty lame. Just a boring submission to me.

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Seinfeld looked a bit weird. You can make him look a bit better. Also, there could've been the Seinfeld theme song going on during the stand up. It was also a bit short. Just make it a lil longer

Pretty funny and cool

3/5
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I chuckled a little when I hear the "X-ray security" crack. I kinda enjoyed when Jerry's head flew off of his neck when he got pelted by a random projectile. The "Giggidy" on the menu was a good time waster.

-Bad-
Well the spoplight effect just didn't look right. I think the background should have been darker if you had chose to do this. Their also wasn't any lipsyncing with made the flash kinda boring.

-Overall-
An okay movie but needs touching up.

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The animation looks a little slow and ungamely. You could do with speeding it all up. The spotlight makes it look like he's being chased by cops - in a standup gig, the spotlight follows them if they walk around on the stage, it doesn't move if they stay still.

I'd advise a better effect for the light would be to darken everything around Jerry and use normal colours to indicate where the light shines.

The trajectory of the tomatoes needs work too. They shouldn't fly straight, they go up, then down a little, before hitting the wall.

Your Lip-sync needs some work too - try playing it back for yourself before submitting, to see if it looks right to you.

Still, keep up the work and we're always here to offer hints and tips.

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