Crayon doodles by 5-year-old

Sorry, I don't mean to be super abusive or anything but it just totally sucks. The lip sync was terrible, the actions don't match anything, the story ... well ok the story was indeed an attempt but its all wasted, ruined, and pretty much mashed up by the animation. Yes, its also highly rude and disturbing to find stuff like this.

I think if you polish your skills and understandings bit by bit, it will make you and your work much better. YOU also seem to have a problem with your style: its like your characters look like someone else's at the same time. It's not THAT original as I think it could be. So give it a brush and you'll do fine. Good luck.

Horrible

This was the most horrible piece of flash work I've ever seen. However, that doesn't mean you can't improve. Keep working at it and try making up your own jokes. And try to do some actual animation instead of a bunch of stills with moving mouths and lousy motion tweening.

Well good try.

But their were some flaws. There was too much extra noise on the voices and the audio was out of sync. And a little more attention to the animation would have been appreciated.

wow

This is pretty much borrowed material. Im not impressed. The animation is terrible. The sound is terrible. The plot is stupid. Spelling is horrible. Get some creativity and a little more practice and then, maybe, you can get somewhere

not too shabby

This was kind of like South Park meets American Dad. Like when Kyle, Stan, Cartman, and Kenney wanna get their Money back from Mel Gibson for the Passion and the alien just resembles the alien from American Dad. Although the idea wasn't totally original I like the twists that you threw in to make this your own. good work.