Haha pretty simple

But I like it. Made me smile and I liked the mario music.

Ill give you an idea

You should make a set of hair and a set of body colors, put them at random order and make a loop, that goes on and on. He will never find a girl!

lol

lol

just like real life

i know how that guy feels :(

A Few Suggestions...

I'm sure you put some effeort into this, it shows - and I thought it was pretty funny. I haven't seen the comic strip this models, so I can't use that as a reference, but here are a few suggestions from my limited point of view :

- The 'blah-blah's were funny but I would have been more entertained by actual textual conversation between our hero and the girls. Just blah blah after blah blah got kind of boring, and to me it shows a limited effort in this Flash on your part.

- The animation was nice, but a little more work on it would have increased my vote. Shading, texturing, and cleaning up your shapes would make ME happy (but who asked). Add more intracate backgrounds also, for a nicer overall look.

But for a Flash cartoon you whipped out in what was probably no time at all, this was pretty clever. I liked the NES soundtrack. Not too bad but I would like to see you make this into something a little more detailed and I'd give it a great rating.

- 2/5 -