(Update - 8/18/2005) You know, it's incredible that 4 years later, I still manage to get reviews on this. Review away, you're not hurting me by completely bashing every element of this junk Flash. Just don't be surprised if I don't take you seriously, as most others would probably do when being pummeled by bad grammar, horrible spelling, and overuse of punctuation.
It was a preview of an amazing series in the making, but as far as I know, nothing's happened to make me good enough at Flash to produce this. Until further notice, this and all other series that I made previews for are not being worked on at all.