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Spoongirl

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This is my second flash. It's about my friend Estrid and her creation of a little friend. It is kinda random because its true. I hope you enjoy it, and please give me a review, even if it's just to say "hi! you suck!" But I hope you don't think that.... Enjoy!

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SPOOOOONNN!!!

as the tick would have said.. "spooon!"
well put together, graphics are nice. just needs a little work on making the tweening a bit more smoothe.
keep it up!

WHOOO

ok. so maybe I gave you an 8 because I like you, but oh well.

I am impressed with how good it was though.

don't listen to the douchebag before me that reviewed it, it wasn't that bad, I've made worse... much... much worse.... I can't draw...

Hey guys look- it's a spoon. Wearing a dress. LOL

What the fuck? This is the stupidest thing I've ever watched. You're probably a fucking jesus kid. I can imagine you & your idiot friends thinking this is hilarious. It's idiots like you who ruined the postal service and everything else. You probably love Bright Eyes too- don't you? Faggot.

lol

lol w00t postal service!

Could be much better.

This looked like it could have a lot of potential. Your style of graphics is decent, but you need to add more animations to your characters, such as in the scene showing the making of Spoongirl.

The plot was lacking and full of holes. Why doesn't this girl have many friends? Where did she acquire this "Magical Danish powder"? There should be more detail, so that people can understand the story more clearly.

The bar scene was also lacking. Why didn't her friends like Spoongirl? Instead of showing a thought bubble of Spoongirl getting her dress burnt, you should actually animate the actions, showing them more cleary, and displaying the girl's reaction to Spoongirl's peril to add a more emotional effect.

The ending was lackluster. The ending was just too abrupt and didn't solve any conflicts at all.

Overall, this Flash has a decent idea, but it could've been executed in a much better way.

1/5

Credits & Info

Views
5,116
Votes
29
Score
2.93 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 4, 2006
5:33 AM EST