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now that was a highly awesome flash
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srry about the sound quality, i had to reduce it so that it would be small enough
I thought it was good.
I liked it. Especially the part with my voice. Don't I sound great? You did a great job establishing the characters. Keep it up!
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I've watched your cartoon three times now and I still don't know what to think about it. For one thing, I didn't think the sound was that bad at all. But the graphics... For a beginner I consider it extremely good... But the PLOT and STORY were amazingly dry. I'm sorry, this was very very dull. The jokes were just plain horrid and not funny. But I have to respect you for trying. Because you did do good, there just needs to be much better writing. And yeah, Brad does sound like hes twelve... You should find another actor for him. And I don't want to sound redundant to all the other comments (I've read them all) But yeah, the begining and distraction scenes were unbearably and painfully long. The begining promoted to me a big half-hour hit show, which of course it isn't. I think you were trying to make it cool to hard. Dramatically shorten the begining. I want to talk to you because this really does fasinate me. Last point- Keep it up man but write better.
Sudden-Flash responds:
this ep was mainly made to introduce the characters and setting. ep.2 will have a better story line because we won't have to intro. the characters
Hey
Kind of good , seeing as this is how all webtoons started (space tree etc....),hopefully the art will improve in time..when you have made more episodes hopefully , but that guy with the long hair did remind me of a "Decline of video gaming" character
Sudden-Flash responds:
ya, the art is A LOT better for episode 2,also, Brad looks nothing like that in real life, and looks completly different from Dim. I just like doing long hair, cause it makes the head animation look so much more realistic.
pretty good
It was all right kinda reminded me of Decline of video gaming but worse.Whats the song at the begining?
Sudden-Flash responds:
the Rescue Me theme song. We're writing all the musi for episode 2 (well, recording it)