It seems like you're going on and off with the dialogue. That's an interesting technique. I guess I would just like more talking. You seem to have a good understanding of story structure. It's just that this was too short. It comes like that in a long running series.
Well, at least one with a lot of episodes. The sounds are quite nice. I admit the breasted snake is really unsettling. I'd be off worse if it WASN'T unsettling. I'm not the biggest fan of this, but it's nice.