Not bad
Judging by your comments, I'm guessing that this is your first attempt at flash. If this is true, then excellent work. Your graphics werent bad, they could have used more detail but I suppose that this style of flash really doesnt require a whole lot of attention to detail. The only real problem I had was that it was hard to understand what was going on at times. I think that the second scene was the most confusing. I'm still not really sure what was going on.
Overall, nice work. You seem like a promising author and I hope to see some more work from you in the future.
-PL