Not bad for a first.
Graphics need work but great for a first. Sounds like you need a new mic. Sound effects are great though louder than the voices. Storyline is very strong. Overall I was entertained and I rate it a 8 out of 10. Again practice drawing skills (you have the basics). Good luck and have a great year. :)
Nice first try
This is pretty good for a first flash. Though you might want to speak louder for Jazzes voice next time.
Good, but not great.
The graphics in this leave much to be desired. I would suggest using shapes instead of doing it freehand. I would also suggest having a picture of the transformers in front of you when you draw. But They were barely recognizable. Also, you need to practice the voice acting for this. It was far off par. Try getting a real microphone and doing it 2 or 3 feet away so you can do Starscream's voice without making it too loud. He tends to yell. lol But you can tell you were using a headset or a computer mic and you were right up to the mic. On the good side, the storyline was a strong one. If you wrote that yourself, it was very well done.
I like it!
While not the most perfectly drawn flash on here. I can see you worked really hard on this. Keeep praticing and I'd like to see this remade one day. Its got potencial. Good work! 5/5 for effort.
YOU MAKE TRANSFORMERS LOOK LIKE SHIT