So this is just a hotel advertisement?

I begin watching this and the first thing I hear, horribly spoken dialogue of some announcer introducing a show. I continue with it just nodding it off as just a small detail overlooked, but then Halo music starts. I couldn't believe this. This short had no place for Halo music, it didn't even fit the mood of the act. Is that the music they play at the hotel when they are showing off this chick? The animation is very cheesy and simple and never held my attention. I nearly shut it off before I realized that it was over so soon, it's one and only redeming quality. A hotel advertisement eh? Blah.

Not so bad...But it is not so good

Music is from HALO wtf!!! I suppose you tried it because is an "ACTION-NotViolence-GIRL" movie ... but Halo music is for "ACTION-VIOLENCE-MAN"
The girl is good, in fact is HOT! X3 hehe I wish I could see her naked hahaha lol joking...
The style and graphics are good, not form other world xD (but yea I suppose thats hard to make 0.O )
Interactivity... there is no... but well that doesnt counts for me I just put 0 in interactivity but I didnt count it for "overall score"
Humor... I didnt find nothig of humor here... so 0... xD
OVERALL--> 5 =S But its fine =) get the other 5 points with sex and violence (I am joking!)

I really dident like it

It just dident fit me it wasent amzeing or didint have a story line or dident have any blood so thereby it gets an F sorry but you can do so much better you are a good animater but I just dident like th flash thats all

what the hell was that?

what the hell was that?, oh, right, that was stupid.

give her some sound effects

this was good though ^_^