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couple crappy shorts...

rated 2.23 / 5 stars
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Jan 25, 2006 | 10:18 PM EST

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This was my very first flash. It's... interesting, but I think it turned out pretty good for my first attempt.



Rated 0 / 5 stars

couple crappy is right

you need a lot more work and a shit load of time on this flash.

Shom responds:

Dear cricket_vinsey. I appreciate your input, but... seriously. When looking at other first flashes on newgrounds and comparing them to mine... I think mine turend out pretty darn good.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

great flash, by far the best on the site. go pro!

you are an amazing artist. i say artist with no doubt in my mind. this is among the mona lisa or the statue of david.
perhaps kenny hubbell will be an imortal name in the history books someday


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Shom responds:

Logan, I actually thought someone was like, stupid enough to be serious.. and then I saw that you wrote this lol.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


Time to break-down.
Graphics: 10/10
Graphics were great! Even the FBF bit!

Style: 10/10
I LOVED THE ANIMATION. It was so smooth and everything melded together. Truly a master at flash, you are.

Sound: 0/10
I just voted 0/10 because my sound was off. Might've been great sound.

Violence: 0/10
There was none, unless you count a robot getting hit by a meteor and a FBF guy getting eaten as violence.

Interactivity: 0/10
Again, none. Cept' for play button. Not even a proper ending!
Just black. What if i wanted to watch it again?

Humor: 7/10
Not hilarious, but still kind of funny.

Pretty good flash!
Not like littleFoot or something like that, but pretty good.

I VOTED: 5/5
Overall great flash.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nicely drawn, but not enough.

Your artwork far out ranks many one here, but you got low scores from most folks for the length of your short and its pointlessness. Even a short needs more to it, time and subject matter. Good work though. I shall keep my eye on you!


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Needs work

The best advice that can be given, is that after the first part it went REALLY fast and became pointless.

Now, just make the animation into something, just so it has some point.