Good Start
I think this has definite potential. Clean up the sound a little bit and play with some shading here and there, but otherwise a really good start.
Author Comments
Well this is it, wasnt good when i started flash but think this cartoon will finish me off completely. Sound is bad cos of compression. Please, if you think this has potent...please say so... wanted to finish, but lets face it everything i try and improve sux (apart from tetris xtreme v2 lol).
Also if you can find it in your hearts :P please donate $1 if you can, lost my job last month and have no cash to pay for the site lol
Llamalord responds:
The shading will be going in with the background updates...well i have around 2 months to update it wont say how long it took to make tho lol...
not bad
Pretty good, graphics so-so like the music selection. Hope this passes judjment!
Llamalord responds:
Thankfully i did, and i suggest "obtaining" keans cd :P very good :)
interesting
hmmm. not bad. not bad at all. continue.
Llamalord responds:
lol thanks :)
Intriguing.
Continue! This is a very interesting beginning!
Llamalord responds:
I thank you :)
very good
dramatic and good but there will be sequals right?
Llamalord responds:
Well this cartoon was completely random (on the spot job) like geefro, so there should be a few more coming, but i wont spoil the next few with voice overs
Also the ending on v1 isnt the real ending to the cartoon, there is alittle more story to be told before ep 2. stay tuned :)
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- Jan 23, 2006
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