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i thik it is good... my dad liked it... oh and can some one tell me a good web for sounds 4 this?
You Have Submitted this movie three times!!! Each one slightly improved. don't u realise that you can just update teh movie! X(
please tell mew how jou did that disapering stuff the orbing thin what neo dose
I got to admit it is pretty good. I mean this would be great if you had sound and do it halfway part of the time, but it is pretty good so keep up the good work and you will have a daily feature.
In a world were there are hundreds of Matrix-esque flash animations, there must be something original in the movies to leave something to stick out in a viewers head to differenciate this from everything else. In this movie, the basic concept is that there is a Matrix and we see people trying to fight for and against it. You definately have a skill for drawing some nice backgrounds, mostly the mountains being the stand-outs in my head. You really do need to add some sound effects, whether it be just a music loop in of a song, and/or just some sound effects like a kick or whoosh. It really does help to make all the difference.
In the Matrix movies they use a combination of Katakana (one of the japanese alphabets) and numbers for the green writings. I noticed you used greek letters, which kinda bothered me :P.
Anyways, maybe you can consider putting Katakana signs in there in future to give it a look closer to the movies. (there are plenty of fonts for that free to download)
Good work though!
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