It was ok
it just got annoying, the voices would have made the story alot better. I liked the characters, but after awhile it just got old, having to read all those long damn words up top. Or i may just be lazy
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NOTE: Full screen button will NOT work in brower display, it was only made for projector submission for me to get extra marks.
Ok im not so good but im just starting out, i made it for my multimedia class at RMIT which im doing since there are no webdesign courses.I ran out of time to add voices to my final submission so yeah i lost marks, but i did get a 23/25. Tell me what you think, all feedback is welcome.
II-Akumu-II responds:
Thanks, next time im going to have to work on the story line better and get some people to make voices for me.
hmm
I think the subtitles were just annoying! Dialogue isn't funny if it's choppy like that because we read and speak faster than we write. Make it so that all of the words that one person's saying comes up all at once. Other than that, some of the dialogue didn't really make sense either.
II-Akumu-II responds:
Ok, i think next time i realy need more work on the story line.
pritty good
that was pritty good man but it could ues a little work just small things like the subtitles(i hate reading) set it back keep it up thow you could make some relly good stuff
:-) good luck
II-Akumu-II responds:
Ok thanks
Huh?
That was ok, the words across the top of the screen were slow...
Nice Try, But...
Please Try Again (And Get Better!!)
II-Akumu-II responds:
Ok thanks for the feedback next time im hoping to include voices
Wierd
Kinda hard to follow and all over the map.
II-Akumu-II responds:
Next time i'll need to re-think the story line, thanks for your review
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