well...it was funny
but the fact that you ripped 70% of your jokes off other stuff really lets me down. It's one thing being inspired, buuut it's another thing directly quoting. You did this in Bitches Ain't Shit with the Waiting quote, and don't credit Waiting.
The women's rights, fingers thing, mickey mouse cartoon part, twin part, almost everything that was meant to be funny was almost a direct quote or copied from another show or movie. Just said, really. You're not bad at art, most of the animation was pretty good, could use some work, but the writing needs serious work. Originality is necessary...hardcore. Audio quality was pretty bad, and the voice acting was mostly ok, but when he yells, I don't like when you whisper it, volume is very important.
the thing that bugs me most is that you took so many jokes and didn't credit or even have an "inspired by" section :(