usually you can tell if a flash is good by the first few seconds, but I gave this one more than a few seconds and it didnt go anywhere.
I know you guys dont have access to voice actors, but that does not mean we want to hear your voice. The voice is annoying (mine is also, but I try to get friends who have better voices than I do or just use captions). The talking was slooowww and boring, wasnt interesting enough to wait for the next cut.
not to shabby
puty about the voice acting. But the story was alright. A bit slow when the computer was talking. More work into the next one and it could be good. Good luck mate.
Overall a pretty good submission. I guess the only thing I'd suggest you work on might be lip synching the speech for the characters (that eyeball guy especially). Hope to see more from you. Good Luck!
This wasn't bad, in fact i believe you show some promise to be a very good creator on this portal. You do still need some work on the graphics and sound. but for the most part this is a good one. Nice work bud.
Thanks, I like reviews that firstly show appreciation of my hard work and secondly are constructive.
BRITISH PPL TALK FUNNY