Poor spelling bumped me over the edge
The cartoon was interesting. Graphics were better than most. Subtitles were rather pointless, though, since they were never on the screen long enough to read. And reading them would have helped, since they talked rather quietly. That, and the poor spelling (alein? should be alien, sound it out) made what could have been barely sub-average not worth watching, at least to me.
I guess that spell-checking yourself, and making the characters more understandable would have gone a very long way for me. And don't plug a website in the cartoon. Save that for your comments on the submission.