Very sad

I couldn't help but tear up to this emotional peice of work. The music would probably be the most important part of the flash. Without it the flash's emotions just drain away.

But enough about that. The overall story was good. And everything seemed spot-on. Altough I wasn't able to find the message, I still enjoyed it very much.
The words were a wee quick, but as you warned I read. I didn't have too many problems with it.

It seemed well put together, and the animation was nice and smooth. You've put a lot of hard work in this. Glad you took your time to make this.

Pulls on the heart strings

Although the graphics are not as expert as some, the story more than makes up for it. It's the kind of story that children can relate too and some adults can remember having lived it. I think you have a talent that needs to be honed. The hyphen is only a small problem. Good job.

Impressive for a "first" flash

Ok, so the graphics could be better, who cares. They were fine for the story. I liked the story, it was even believable in some way. Can imagine that if you've never done something wrong, this can have quite an impact. Allthough, seriously, the helping-old-ladies-cross-the-street part was waaay to sappy. :)
Also, towards the ending, there was too little time to read the text. Slow down the framerate a little, or let the text last longer.
Oh yeah, and that last sentence, it starts with well-behaved, but ends with well behaved. It may sound stupid, but after such a sad story, a small mistake like that gave me a little laugh. You may want to change it :)

what the hell was that???

its was ok but really what the hell was that? this movie is kind of dumb why he run away its a petty dumb reason.

sad.

That was very good. It was also kind of sad. I really feel that you have made a most wonderfull movie. I can hardly wait to see your next movie. I am sure it will be as magnificent as this one was. You'll get my 5 every time with this level of work. Thank you very much for your submission.