eh.

I understand it's your first flash movie. or rather your first that you've submitted to newgrounds. It will make, I know it will not get blammed. But dude, there are some serious issues you need to work on. first off, the sound was horrific. those fucking boots drilled a hole in my head, the store song had an obvious loop. etc. it was just bad. and another thing was the wait times. a lot of times during the movie, nothing was happening. and last, the story. it really had no structure to it. all I got out of it was some random guy, found a shop. rebuilt it in 2 seconds, turned it into a quick shop (IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE!), and lowered his prices so much that he got rich. it just doesn't make sense. and I know, cartoons don't have to make sense. but in those gategories, they do. good graphics though. keep working at it. you'll get better. you have true potential.

not bad at all

wow... if everyone's first flash was like this, newgrounds would be a much happier place. I'm sure this will pass (or maybe it already passed as I'm writing this). one comment though... try to loop audio better next time.
everything else was good; compared to a first flash, it was great!
keep it up,
Darth Pejka

i thoght it was good

good for a frist flash mine was wrose

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Not too bad

it was a pretty good movie, but the idea of building a shop kinda messes it up. it looks really cool in the beginning, but it fades away after he makes the shop. its still a good animation