ok
I actaully liked the sticks, they were all well drawn, exept for the grey ones. However, the last scene went by way to fast, and i coulnt tell what was going on exept a green thing (a grenade i supose?) lands on the floor and the screen goes red and everythings is spinning. Yeah it sounds like an acid trip.
So basicly you need to improve on your basic animation. i dont mean anything spusific, i just mean like little handy tips and tricks.
I would recomment you stay with that style of blood, as it was pretty cool, and the style of sticks were fine.
overall, ok work