Notbad

Well this was notbad seems like you could ad a bit more to this and more options to give it that extra but it was a nice idea and seems like it can be even better

~X~

Heh

Well it's a good start, but it is pretty simple as it is, if you could add more "levels" and occasional powerups you could increase the addictional factor heaily. Keep up the good work!

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^^Good Points^^
Ok, some of the drawings were ok, like the people. Actually not that poorly done.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was a very boring game. The storyline was lack luster, and I had no idea who this guy was in the strange hat, or why my character kept saying "Hmo". The music is kind of annoying because it restarts all the time. This isn't very boring and I didn't have fun playing it at all.

Sorry, I didn't really enjoy this

I didn't really enjoy this. Sorry. There are many places you have to 'patch up'. The graphics are sort of sub-par and I don't really understand the whole plot of the story. You have made plenty of flashes/games; I don't know if this one was one of your first or not. If it was, this might be excusable, but, if it was one of your later flashes, you should really improve.

Graphics are a very important of (most) flash movies. Of course, there are a few exceptions (as I mentioned above), but most have to have at least half-decent graphics. This one doesn't really have very great graphics; they are mediocre. Of course, (most) graphics aren't going to be perfect, but most should be, again, good, or at least a little more than average. These really aren't. They are pretty much dead on the average line.

Style-wise, this I'll give you a little bit more in than graphics because there was some style to this game. I guess the way you did the buttons to move the text forward was okay, and I didn't mind the character designs. When people die and/or fall over, though, try and make them not turn 2D-ish and sort of slump down on to the floor; make them more 3D-ish and have them fall backwards... I realize this may sound like a hard task, but it will probably improve your flashes!

Sound waasn't bad, and it was maybe even pretty good. The quality of the sound was average, I guess, but you adjusted the volume down approprietly, and it worked. The music wasn't blaring at you, it was nice and, well, not soft, but... right, I guess you could say. The choice of music was probably pretty right for the spots in the game where music was included.

Violence there was some of. The gun part and the blood counted for some of it, as did the tying-up scene. On the note of the tying-up scene, I couldn't get past it! Where's the place you're talking about to 'disable the trap?' Anyway, yes; there was some violence.

For interactivity there was a more than average (from what I played). You could click the text, and the gun scene counted as interactivity. That's pretty much all there really is to say about interactivity.

And last, humour; there was none. But, it doesn't really matter in a game like this... it's not supposed to be funny, it's supposed to be serious.

This was average, overall. The pretty good sound, and above average style counted towards some of the points, and the graphics took away from some of the points (don't get me wrong, I don't overall my score with points... I'm just sort of saying that metaphorically, if you understand what I mean). I don't really dispise the graphics in this game, I just think they could use some improving. Anyway, overall, it was average. If you improved it, I think it could actually be pretty good.

Strange...

...But that doesn't mean it wasn't good!