:~> Well...
This was not what I would call a nice start. Sure, it's well-drawn, the voices are fine, the colors are beautiful and the animation is smooth. Technically, this is a great job. But the plot is scaring. In this 30sec movie, nearly nothing happened. It sounds way more like a trailer or a preview than like a "part I". If you intend to make the next parts as short as this one, with your storing advancing one centimeter per chapter, than this is not a nice perspective.
Again, your movie is thecnically nice and very intriguing. But it seems (so far, at least) that you really gotta run faster with that plot.
# Poirot #