the part where his best friend put an arrow trough him was a bit drastic
That was so great! Overall it flowed together with it's general randomness and subtle comedy... However it lacked the type of music you'd see on a commercial like this... maybe occasionally put in some of the good ol' elevator music?
I think that would make the commercial seem much more like a parody. Also, the one part with the old man (I think) talking in the background... it was a bit difficult to hear him without blasting up my speakers... Great job though!
maybe i shud send this to my ex.. >:( he got da same habit..
I was happy with it.
It was a strong and enjoyable piece and did make me laugh on a few occasions. The graphics were as pleasing and consistant. I really like that style of cartoon. The music was of the essence. It lacked what was needed of it. The style was fine. This piece was going very strongly indeed until the crossbow was bought out! That was incredibly random and I think it probably took it too far. The ending was a little odd too. Usually, that thing entertains me - violence and women! but it just didn't link terribly well with the rest of it, and the randomness of it wasn't needed. However, I did enjoy it. Had it not been for the flaws mentioned, an outstanding grade would have been on the cards! Well done!
The guy's nipples looked weird.