*UPDATE* January 6 2009 : about three years since the chapter was origionally made I decided to do a little changes, sort of a redux.I updated some of the look to match the final entries.I went back on the reviews and took the good advise that were given , also I learned a little more about flash since 2006 so I updated some effects as well.Sound was another factor where I also did changes and as well as music. Chapter 3 was an intro to for the villans and also I wanted to connect CH 3 and CH 4 .
That's odd. I could have sworn that the characters would speak in English at this point. I still appreciate the artwork and developing story. I was turned off by the breasts on these characters. The lizard woman just seemed way too humanoid. The sounds were fairly good.
There were a few errors. You did "DIPLAYED" instead of "DISPLAYED". I would still recommend this. I guess I would have liked more action. It's still fairly unique.
Pretty good but the subtitles need to stay up longer. Nice job nonetheless.
Kind of annoying
Wow, that was the most annoying sound I've ever heard. Like, dude, it would have been better as a silent flash, as opposed to all those repititious high pitched screams. It wasn't all that great, except for the mood it kinda gave. It was effective at providing a dark and evil feel to it, so for that you get props. Otherwise it was pretty hurtin, you have potential, ya just need practice, and never use sounds like that again...harsh.
Kny...
This one was definitly much better then the others most becaus of the story...
I hope the rest of them are better then the other ones i have seen.
great
the subtitles don't stay up long enough to read it all.
