Not bad for random
You have a pretty good sence of timing. It was actually funny. I didnt like the screeching at the end. It helped alot that you told us it was just some randomness at the beginning, that way my expectations were low. I didnt expect an epic drama or what not. Your also smart enough to use a photo for a back ground if you cant draw it. I wish more people would. And stick people. Its better to draw a stick person well than try to draw a person and it looks like crap.
If the comedy is funny enough or the story good people will like it.
Havent looked at your other stuff. But this was fun piece. I would link it on my site but the screech at the end would annoy more people than would find funny.