I saw this yesterday, and it's abit better, but only because there's not so much of a big break between the speech... The graphics still need work! And the voices need syncing. Syncing's easy, just make keyframes and put the sound file there for each sentence instead of a block bit, and also strem it and blah... It needs work, but if you do it up better, with improved graphics, and synced voices and subs blah, this will be better. Though, now I think of it, maybe the whole point was that the graphics suck? *shrug* Sure seemed that with that awful bus that were funny... *gives a muffin of congrats which gives you more flash knowledge and a +10 in yummy! Nah, it just makes you less hungry... Eats it himself*
There is always room for improvement...
You need to get the lips to move in sync with your words and you need to make your subtitles be said at the same time as your characters' voices. Beside that I fuckin loved it! It was short, random, and funny as hell. You also need more interaction. I gave it a 4 on sound because your voices weren't in sync and I gave you a 6 for violence because all he did was smack him (2x). Get better on the things I mentioned and bring out another one. It will be grade A if you take my advice.
thanks for the review. I find ur advice very usefull.. thnx ill try to do that..
It's not bad, but it's not good
I don't like this movie ,it's long and I'm sleeping when I watch it.
But graphics are nice...
Needs work , keeping going at it
Spaces dudes ha!!
I call this space junk! animations and sounds r bad