Pure shit.

Jonas! I fucking hate you Jonas, loser.

Good but sloppy

Hello this is very nice movie although it is sloppy, i still realy like it and i cant wait to see how good the next one will be, you could improve the animation abit in this movie but thats all that realy needs improved and maybe the sounds aswell.

It shows potential.

As MANY have said, you really need to learn to spellcheck your scripts. The story was skind of original, thing is went too much the the tune of "I, Robot" with the whole "robots learning to be independent" thing, as others have said. The blood was very well done however, and it shows in my violence mark. As someone has also said, work on the actual character animation, 'cause people don't run by shuffling their feet together with their heads hunched over and buried in their shoulders. Besides that, you've got a pretty decent flash here. Just take some of the stuff that other users and I have said. I give it a 3/5.

The Thumb:
In the Middle

That Other Dude

Somebody, shoot it in the backhead!!!

The only redeeming thing about this was your awful spelling, I even rewatched it in order to enjoy such delights as "use hes Brain".

Frankly I think if your going to go to the trouble of doing an animation as long as this one you could at least use a spell check, and maybe a dictionary.
Actually your animation wasn't that bad, it just a shame the story isn't more original, and why the hell is every character name hyphenated.

Keep working at, I look forward to part two.
P.s.
I'm going to be chuckling over the word backhead for days.

Needs work

Animation wasn't that great, and you need to run your text through spell check so that you don't look like a moron. But, the story was decent.