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Jan 2, 2006 | 6:50 PM EST

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This is my first submission into Newgrounds. Very short, but I plan to submit more. Im currently working on a much longer animation, but I just wanted to see what viewers thought of what i have now. Everyone has their own opinions, so i expect to see some negative reviews, but I love drawing and animation, so I'll do what i can to improve. Thank you for your time, and please take the time to write a review....Enjoy.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Nice Graphics and animations, promising artist


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Stylish enough

The animation was admittingly not impressive. But while it wasn't exactly breathtaking, it was stylish enough. The music was pretty good, and I thought it suited the animation quite well. It seems like a decent story so far, maybe not a totally original one, but still it will be interesting to see where this leads. With some work on your animation, this could be very impressive.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

two questions

the graphics weren't out of this world but the style of it was really well done. just black and white, plain and simple but it went really well with the song. just two questions what was the name of that song and the singer? good luck on the full version.

Okari responds:

Yeah, I really like the song. But anyways...the name of it is "Zips" and the maker is T.M. Revolution. Thanks for the review.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I really like the style of this one..

This is a pretty cool flash. Worthy of a much higher rating than it
presently has. I like the black and white outline style quite a bit, and the girl's running sequence. It seems like its got potential.
The dream sequence is pretty interesting when he drops the girl.

Me I tend to like plot elements, and stories that don't follow
preset formulas. One of the biggest draws of newgrounds
for me, is the fact that since the animations are not for profit, the
possibility for new and unusual plots is virtually unlimited.

Don't let people discourage you! Keep up the good work, and
try your hardest to tell a good story.

Okari responds:

Thanks, I'll try my best.


Rated 2 / 5 stars


looks alrite, improve the graphics for next movies

Okari responds:

I was just very impatient. That's my downfall. Once I start something, then i start to rush, and I submitted without thinking. I wont happen next time though. But thanks for the review.