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This sprite movie is finally here! I worked hard on it and would appreciate reviews.
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This needs improvement...
Here are some suggestions:
1. Don't make Ness so big.
2. For the text box, it looks like a Paint JPEG (and probably is) so you might wanna get Photoshop to fix that...
3. Might want to make it a bit longer and much funnier.
Other than that, EarthBound rocks! And... that's all. Hope my suggestions help. ;)
"2. For the text box, it looks like a Paint JPEG (and probably is) so you might wanna get Photoshop to fix that..."
You've got a sharp eye ;)
this is the kind of stuff that makes people hate Sprite Movies.
it just isnt good
Well, I guess that is a valid point, but you could atleast include some commentary on what could have been done to fix it.
I wasn't too keen on it, not much happened.
At first I was a little dissappointed as to how Ness was too big compared to his surroundings, but I didn't let that one bother me too much. What I was a little disappointed about though was the lack of story, when Ness entered the arcade, it led me to believe that some full-blown story was coming, but instead it was just a 5-second little incident and then it was all over, perhaps you could have had some little adventure story happening instead of just suddenly ending it.
Lots Of Love, Rebecca Rose
I'm not good at movies, thats why it ended like that, thanks for reviewing all my stuff
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