Too bad this is on Toonami. :P
Well anyways... I liked it. You kept the characters in "character", and even made it more original and more fast paced than the actual cartoon. The only problem I have with it, is the music background. Some OSTs have been cut off too soon, or didnt fit in with the situation. Other than that, It's awesome. Hope you make another battle-battle situation, like... Neji vs Shikamaru. :P
ps. this cartoon is the reason why you guys watch the japanese version, than the english version.