Two years ago, I created a film. This film was like no other. And yet, it still got blammed. Now, after two years of intense flash training, I have created a new, marvelously enhanced version of, Ski Lift Kids. Enjoy!
Interesting to see how it improved.
I was a little let down with the enhanced version. I thought for sure it would have voice sync done correctly. That would be my suggestion to work on next. A proper voice sync adds a great deal of professionalism to even the most basic of images.
I like how the scenes played out in the later version. The smallest of changes helped it flow much smoother than the first attempt.
Intensive flash trainning?
Then It wasn't good enough for me! The best part was the graphics however the story line was slow and pointless, no music, really bad voices ( atleast add subtitles ), to be honest it was a really bad take on happy tree friends.
Still it was much better than the origninal - but you need to defently correct the points I have suggested for this to go forward.
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not to good
In two years all you learned was some shading crap? And your mouths were a little better... only a little and the little ones voice was so annoying I just wanted to BLAM BLAM BLAM the whole time! : D
How old are you? 10?
Seriously kid, you should really consider growing up, then try to make a funny flash. And if you're older than 10, hit puberty.