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Ortus(Part II)

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Dec 28, 2005 | 2:22 PM EST

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UPDATE- At people's request, I have added a preloader, and I have added Subtitle for part II(part I has no speaking), and will shortly add part III.

ORTUS is my first flash animation (or any 2D animation), that I have ever done. I drew and did the backgrounds (by exploring through another program), and the file was so big that I broke it down to 3 PARTS! So please, before giving a full review, see all parts of ORTUS, to understand the story(if not you will probably be very confused).

There are a couple of things that I still can't understand well in flash (like sound ect.), since it's my first time. So I would apreciate constructive criticism, to try and get better with my mistakes.

All music in thall Ortus parts is originally by their respective(and talented) own
ers.

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ramagiramagi

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Better.

Ok at first the characters look better than the last one.
I like the fact you added voices, at points it was hard to hear the voice with the music going. You need to make it a bit louder, or maybe that is why you included the subtitle.
I liked this one better than the first one, you made some nice improvements.
I watchedthe first part twice then came and watched this, the story line doesn't seem to follow a fluid path, heck I'm still a bit confused what it was in the first one. This seemed to have it's own little story going which was nice. Play buttons are a cice feature to include.


bica1 responds:

yeah, the story won't be understood until the third one...and even then, there will be connections to the story...If I knew how to do the play feature, I would. I will look it up, and take into consideration to what you said.


GrizzleyGrizzley

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

pretty good but

like you said, the sound needs improvement. the beggining art looked awesome as well as the rest of it. but you could have added a play button so it wouldn't play while it was loading. but luckly for me, it didn't stop or lag. good job overall.


bica1 responds:

thank you! I fixed that, and also added subtitles, to each section (parts I-III)


OppugnantOppugnant

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice work

But i watched pt. I & II and i still don't really get the story behind it. Of course what it lacked in sound and story it made up for in graphics they were brilliant you have a lot of skill in that area.


bica1 responds:

At this moment, with out part III, people are probably not understanding the story. Hopefully, when part III comes out, it will be easier for people to understand (if they watch part I-III).

But thank you for complementing my art <:D


ForkClockForkClock

Rated 5 / 5 stars

sweet

i got the savior movie. i bet this will get front page like no other.


bica1 responds:

Thank you, I sure hope so......


Panzerp00Panzerp00

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very Nice

I loved it. The Art kept me involved in it. I'd suggest putting a preloader in all of the parts, just to make it easier so we don't have to right click, stop playing in order to watch it without skipping.

The music was nice, but the voices were nearly inaudible.

But keep up the good work, I look forward to some more of your work.


bica1 responds:

I have officially have updated to put preloaders on part I and part III. Sadly, if you read below, I explain my reason to why I can't add a preloader to part II.

lesson learned from me <:D