Could have been better, but great idea
The idea for this was very good, I don't know if this is stolen, but the idea is still genius. One comment is that the language was rather excessive, and the music got very annoying after a while. Having voice actors would really add to this, so would a toning down on the language.
i know voice actors would be great , but do you know any , or do you want to be a voice actor ?
olved it but.. minor issues
it was great but need to work on a background music like that piano thing. hey!if you did the piano thing its cool i love that song
i didnt do the piano thing , someone from the audio portal did . I wil add some background music
This was very funny man
Good luck in the future!
Lol i loved it, it was hilarious !
You made a good story and a funny one also! WOOT U GOT OWNED ! I like this part. CMON MAKE ANOTHER ONE !!!
ok , if you have any suggestions , pm me
LMAO, i still think it's retarded
at first i thought it was absolutely shite, but fuck me, it just gets funnier and funnier!
next time try better music