Steve and Max are the ones to get credited for the music . this is my first flash and i promise that future episodes will be at least 3 minutes. It was just an opening for part 2 of my series.
Poor storyline, bad movie
You have no plot whatsoever. You need to establish some characters, show us some REASON for all this crap these people are talking about. You can't expect the viewer to read your mind and just know what these people are about. Make a story out of this. Introduce and build characters, introduce and build a plot. Once you've done these things resumbit your entry and I'll save it. Right now I'm heading for blam.
Short..
It's a short, story builder, yet I still don't quite get what's going on, but eh..
It needs to be longer.
It also needs to have some voices. If ya need a voice, you can call me up if ya wish. Umm, any other things? The graphics are a wee bit crappy, but if ya keep working on them, they'll get better.
Don't give up hope yet.