No, what the HELL is wrong with YOU?
Oh, I KNOW! You SUCK!!
I'm sorry, I don't really HATE it, and alot of your other stuff is actually pretty good. This one, though... man, I was EATING... and WHY THE HELL was their blood on his(?) ass!?
I'm sorry, but it could be better. Just try and... well... I'm out of constructive criticism...