Lots of improvement!
Wow! The sound was much better quality in this one. You've got an original style that cracks me up - I hope you keep submitting work like this. A few quirks:
The sound got too quiet while in the water. And that guy's squeaky voice, while funny, got tiresome by the end.
There was a smattering of music, but it needed more to set the mood or whatever music does.
I liked the cameos of Grandma and the Creepy Jailbird again. Plus that goldfish was priceless.. ah, Wisconsin, country of countries.
Excellent work! Can't wait to see more.
I'm not going to use Windows Sound Recorder for the recording the voices anymore, that should help some.. heh.. and music is a hard thing for me to work into my cartoons, but hopefully I'll improve with time.
Thanks for the encouragement! :)
well the old guys gave it the humor and this is by far the most odd flash i have seen in awhile still funny
Thanks :) I like it odd.