dude...

I don't know what to say it's all bad.make something new and try again

Silv.

Dude...

Okay, WTF! A mummy that kinda sounds like Cleavland. Are they in jail? I would scrap it and start over with somthing... Good.

lol

Interactive toilet paper..

Like the animation

I liked the animation, but I didn't really get the concept and it was bit slow paced....

Well

i have just one thing to say, and that is:
Although i may not be able to create flash...i must say this is crap...if it is your first attempt then ok, good luck in the future, but if it isn't, read a couple of tutorials please...