Interesting
I felt like I was watching a Spanish soap opera. It was interesting how you switched between Flash drawn and important hand drawn imagery. There were a few visual areas that could have been cleaned up but nothing major. I enjoyed it.
Author Comments
Since my first movie was not only unfinished, but at poor quality(thusmakingahorriblebadfirstimpressiononnewgrounds), I decided to break my ass on this one! >_* I hope I don't dissapoint anybody this time! ^_^ By the way for those that might not notice, I used the song Beautiful by Mandalay.
okay
this seems okay
animation is not brilliant but the drawing is good
work on animation ;)
kule
looks intresting cant wait till uve finished i ope 2 see it on front page 1 day keep it up
Decent trailer.
You seemed to have executed your idea pretty well even though I had a difficult time following it. I forgot what it was about after the title went away and was confused by the words and how they were used. I liked your use of transitions. I played it through a three times but still had difficulty paying attention. Emptiness can often be distracting. Nice music choice. Used well.
Different than most teasers.....
Okay, well I thought this was good. Umm....the idea i think is a bit overused. the whole "love. lust deception"
I say this because before each one came, i was able to guess what it would be. and telling from the music(which was a good choice tho), and the presentation of the characters and the pacing, it was obvious it would be of somewhat a love and crime kinda scenario. anyways, umm.. the visuals/graphics were rather good...except the characters...they were a bit bland. but i think it's just cuz they were your concept sketches for them...and they weren't the final thing that you would put in the final movie. um, I think your music choice was right-ON!! That was really great music for your story.
next, I think that the story, like i said above, is good, but overused. i've seen that kind of plot in dozens of movies and tv no offense, but maybe, if there's a movie to be made from this...it'll have it's own unique twist. The animation was simple....but it was good nonetheless; it served its purpose.
i liked your little changeovers. with the clouds and misty stuff.
one thing i have to say, though, is the part with the bloody knife was a bit too drawn out. and then it got boring which made me want to look away. also, it just seemed to be floating!, until i saw the reflection below it, but still...it wasn't very clear on where it was.
but, other than that, FOR A TEASER this was ok. the final movie should be interesting to watch. i'll look out for that. good luck!