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um nothing new or inmteresting but itas too short but at the beginming it looked pretty good@!

not good

pretty much a piece of crap. if this was you first submission, then it is understandible. but if you have had morwe than this, i think you would have more content, and SOUND. i give it a 1-2. keep going and maybe improve this and you will hjave a better rep tahan "the guy who made the pice of crap". sry for bein so hard : (

Nice but you have problems

First, you don't have the heart of the flash: THE SOUND!
Twice, U need to do a Play button or somthing and intro and make a End?
Like add your website or somthing, from which guy is made an etc
Nice, but you have big errors

Errh

it just ends like that? i mean you could have made it a biiiit longer and it's a little boring cause there's no sound on. 3/10

yeah

really good for a first one, but if you add sound it will have more chanse of getting in.