Question...
I love it, i really do, i love that part that has various rolls, but i have a question:
_What's your first flash?
Author Comments
for those of you who hated "My first flash toon EVER!" hows this for a comeback? you will probably laught at the fact that it took me about 3 days just to make this short little clip, but hey, i am learning and getting use to all of the tools. anyways, this is a cool little movie about a short dog fight. i made it short because i endeded up having like 50 folders and over 100 layers and everything started to get confusing.
HPI-Freak responds:
yes, it was my first attempt at a flash animation. i know the voices are hard to understand, they are suppose to be that way (unaudible) because i dont know the real military "jargon" they use, so its just suppose to sound like radio chatter.
kind of a good start...
its not bad for a start....I couldn't understand the voices though
Great start.
Even though you did use bitmaps, they were uh...well cut out. It was entertaining and did add an element of 'realness.' They wern't too hideously blown out of proportion. However, if you worked hard and drew and animated your own dog fight well, it would be better than using bitmaps. The sound was hard to decipher as well.
Pretty good...
Pretty good for a 2nd flash. Next time you could involve more of a plot instead of some random clips of dogfights.
=.=
not very good
atleast u put in some effort and for that i voted 2/5 to save
HPI-Freak responds:
i know its bad, but its only my second flash. i mean, how good was your second flash? i also know the sound sucks because i couldnt find the SFX i needed so i improvised. i even made some myself. and as for pasting all my work, yea i know i didnt make it, but i was going for a more realistic feel to it. i didnt know how to make realistic looking bullets and fire. and the landing on the carrier, i messed it up and when i tried to fix it, it would just make it worse, so i left it. dont worry, i have been watching hours and hours of tutorials and my work will only get better
